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W. Davd Phillips

Integrating Missional Thinking, Living, and Culture

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Life Lessons Learned from Writing a Book part 2

Friday, April 16th, 2010

Life lesson #2: We all need a group of editors.
Editors are different from accountability partners. Accountability connotes keeping track; that is the role of an accountant and that is the meaning of the root word. However, 1 Corinthians reminds us that love keeps no accounting (record) of our wrongs. If we love someone we don’t keep track of their faults and failures as an accountant would keep track of every dime spent. That is not love.

An editor does things differently. An editor takes what they are given and offers corrections and suggestions based only what is before them. They do not keep copies of your previous submissions. They may notice patterns, but they do not keep a systematic and conscious account of all that you have done in the past. Their job is to take what is given and get it to better place.

Too many of us have accountability partners. More of us need editors. And we need a group of editors, not just one. When I wrote Holy Rewired, I had input from several people across multiple disciplines. They gave their input, offering criticism on content and grammar. Some were specialized, offering comment on just grammar and others offered comment on the content. But there were several of editors. And the book is better because of their input.

Who are your editors? Who do you trust to partner with the Holy Spirit and get you from where you are to where He wants you to be?

Life Lessons Learned from Writing a Book part 1

Wednesday, April 14th, 2010

This week I finished all the edits on my upcoming book, Holy Rewired: Science, the Gospel, and the Journey Towards Wholeness. As I was sending the last thoughts to the publisher, I began to think about the lessons I could learn from writing this book. I generally process experiences after they happen, and this was one experience where I did not want to have the lessons leave me. I have written them down for myself, and I want to share with you over the next several days some lessons about life that I have learned from writing a book.

Life Lesson #1: Despite your own thoughts, if you have haven’t done something well many times, you are not going to be good at it.
I went into this process with the mindset that writing would be easy. The hard part would be putting aside the time to write. I was wrong. This book was birthed in 2006-2007, early in my doctoral work. In fact, my intention was to also produce a publishable manuscript in addition to the dissertation. So when I set out to write my dissertation, I enlisted an editor who had edited some well-known books. It was then that I learned how bad of a writer I was.

I would get back from her a document that looked like she had bled all over it. And the criticism was difficult. I didn’t explain things. I didn’t define things. Some things just didn’t make any sense. I had mis-matched metaphors. And that didn’t include all the grammar issues! She was tough, yet I was immensely greatful.

When I turned the dissertation into a book, I had to write differently. I had to transition my writing from an academic work to a work for the masses. I had to clean up language, dumb down language, and make it understandable to those who might not think critically or want to get deeply involved in a intellectual exercise. That took a great deal of work, which I hope I have now accomplished.

Now truthfully, I thought I was a pretty good writer. I thought I was a good writer because I always got good grades in English and when I did papers in graduate school no one ever really criticized my writing. Working with a professional, however, showed me I was wrong.

After getting this book done, I’m actually trying to work on my writing by taking some free creative writing classes through several universities as part of the open courseware consortium. I am trying to be more careful with my language and my metaphors. I am trying to be more cautious with how I express my thoughts. I am trying to pay more attention to details (more on that later).

There is an old saying that practice makes perfect. That is not true. Practice makes permanent. Many of us have practiced something over and over again and now it is permanently part of our behavior. That doesn’t mean its perfect, unless you believe that you can do something perfectly wrong. Unfortunately, that is what I did. I developed a style of writing and that style became permanent. But it wasn’t good writing.

Anything that is worth doing is worth doing right. It is also worth doing well. To do that, however, will require the help of an editor. More on that in the next post.

Around the Web

Saturday, March 14th, 2009

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Links for the Week

Some favorite links from around the web this week:

ARIS study released this week

The Coming Evangelical Collapse: A Statistical Review by Michael Bell
An evaluation of iMonk’s claims on the coming evangelical collapse through the eyes of statistical analysis

Losing My Religion? Not So Fast… Loren Green of Foxnews.com thinks that ARIS might not be so negative after all. She looks at the stats before 2001 and after to demonstrate the potential impact of 9/11.

Suburbia

Suburbia R.I.P. Does the downturn spell the beginning of the end for suburbia? Some experts say yesterday’s cul-de-sac is tomorrow’s ghost town.

Communication

How to Squeeze Writing Inspiration from Every Experience Do you have days where you sit in front of an empty page – and find nothing, absolutely nothing you could write about? I used to. But now I’ve learned to squeeze inspiration from every experience.

Tell Stories We live in a world with information overload. Data, facts, statistics and definitive answers to specific questions are immediately available from search engines on the internet. But people want more than facts. They want understanding. They want meaning. They want context. They want stories.

Ministry

In Search of Dolphin Leather The acquisition of the leather is irrelevant. It was the quest that mattered. Having a community-based quest means that there’s less room for whining, for infighting and for dissolution. Having a mission not only points everyone in the same direction, it also creates motion. And motion in any direction is often better than no motion at all.

Instilling Missional Habits in a Congregation – As You Walk Among Your Community How do we lead a church community to engage mission as a way of life? How do we steer a congregation out of evangelism programs into everyday missional living? How do we train a congregation out of Christendom habits and instill post Christendom virtues (character for living faithfully in post Christendom)? I think leaders walk along and among their communities.

Who Should the Church Pay to Serve? Neil Cole begins to examine this issue and share who is supported “full time” in the NT.

Who Should The Church Pay: Double honor to the preachers and teachers Paul does mention giving “double honor” to elders, and especially those that work hard at preaching and teaching. I am in favor of giving honor and double honor to godly elders who shepherd, mentor and teach the churches. But I have a hard time interpreting “double honor” as a full-time salary and benefits. We have come up with the word “honorarium” based on this expression in the New Testament. When we present a speaker with a financial token of appreciation I actually think we are closer to Paul’s intent in this passage.